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My nieces The challenge of the day is making comparisons in the sentences. I have got two nieces and they are twins but they aren’t identical. Their names are Lénia and Lara. Lara is more playful and good-humoured than Lénia however Lénia is taller and full of energy than her sister. Lara has a strong personality and Lénia is more amiable than Lara. However, both are very cute and happy children.

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My nieces

The challenge of the day is making comparisons in the sentences. I have got two nieces and they are twins, but they aren’t identical. Their names are Lénia and Lara. Lara is more playful and good-humoured than Lénia; however Lénia is taller and more energetic (you can say "with more energy" here, but I like "more energetic" better) than her sister. Lara has a stronger personality, and Lénia is more amiable than Lara. However, both are very cute and happy children.

 

Very good, Ana Cristina!  Just have a look at my comment regarding the words "more energetic."  I think you might prefer to use this expression.  :)

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My Nieces

 

The challenge of the day is making comparisons in the sentences. I have got two nieces and they are twins but they aren’t identical. [You can use "fraternal twins"] Their names are Lénia and Lara. Lara is more playful and [more] good-humoured than Lénia however Lénia who is taller and has full of more energy than her sister [understood]. Lara has a stronger personality and but Lénia is more amiable than Lara. [Understood] However, both are very cute and happy children little darlings. [more endearing]

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