Correction Request

I recognize the importance of good friends these days. They make me smile and give me some hope to keep trying anything again. Furthermore, reading some books is also useful when I feel lonely. When I read words something which I can empathize with, I feel like I'm talking with someone. However, these days I don't feel like reading something quietly. Instead I watch movies. I saw 'The Temperature of Love' yesterday last night. It was a good film to which I could empathize with and the background music of it was really good.

Note: "It was good to empathize with" is grammatically correct, however it doesn't sound quite right.

Excellent! Just a few minor errors, keep up the good work!

Correction Request

I recognize the importance of good friends these days. They make me smile and give me some hope to try anythings again. Furthermore, reading some books is also useful when I feel lonely. When I read words which that I can empathize with, I feel like I'm talking with someone. However, these days I don't feel like reading something quietly. Instead I watch movies. I saw 'The Temperature of Love' yesterday last night. It was good to empathize with and the background music of it was really good.

Hi Clare, 

In stead of corrections, may I suggest phrasing some sentences differently?

I recognize the importance of good friends thesedays.
Thesedays, I have came to realise the importance of friendship.

They make me smile and give me some hope to try anything again

They make me smile and give me hope to try things again.

Furthurmore reading some books is also useful when I feel lonely. When I read words which I can empathize with, I feel like I'm talking with someone.
Reading also helps when I feel lonely, reading a good book is like talking to someone.

However, these days I don't feel like reading something quietly. Instead I watch movies.

However, reading is too quiet for my liking these days; instead, I prefer movies.

I saw 'The temperature of Love' yesterday night. It was good to empathize with and the background music of it was really good.

Last night, I saw a movie called "The Temperature of Love"; I was touched by it and the soundtrack was really good.

There are many ways to write and sometimes less is more!
Hope this helps!

Fred