不要懶惰, 英文的我非要大寫不可! 会被人看你沒学問 :)

i begin my dream

Today, i begin to learn English with some foreigner friends. i feel very happy . i think i just come to my dream.(我不知道这句怎么说 ：我离我的梦想又近了一步) [Eva 的翻譯非常好, 更的確的翻譯是 My dream and I are closer by a step.  Hers is better since it is shorter but with the same meaning]Hope my dream will come true someday. Have a sweet dream

I begin am closer to my dream

Today, I shall begin to learn English with some foreigner friends, so i feel very happy. I think I just come am a step closer to achieving my dream.(我不知道这句怎么说 ：我离我的梦想又近了一步) I hope my dream will come true some day. Have a sweet dream

i begin my dream

Today, i begin to learn English with some foreigner friends. i feel very happy . i think i just come to my dream.(我不知道这句怎么说 ：我离我的梦想又近了一步) Hope my dream will come true someday. Have a sweet dream

This isn't as important but you should always capilize the letter that starts every sentence. You also always capitalize "I" when referring to yourself.

I begin my dream

Today, I begin to learn English with some foreigner friends. I feel very happy . I think I just come to my dream.(我不知道这句怎么说 ：我离我的梦想又近了一步) Hope my dream will come true someday. Have a sweet dream