Lastly/Finally, Chinese think believe that life should go something like this: love, marriage and then sex. Loyalty and faithfulness/fidelity are essential to happiness. Cheating, [except for the man!] breaking up separation and divorce bring shames. These ideas beliefs are stamped on into our heads; ideas, just like many a man married many are bent to marry only a virgin in the past. [Still the preference of today! I say this from a view point of a man.  Unless you are very western educated, the majority of Asian male mentality is "paying premuim" for 2nd hand used goods! A cause of later breakups as an excuse by the man.]the Having fewer relationships the is better. However, (attitudes are changing though).

While foreigners go this way: Westerners prefer sex, love and then marriage or co-habitation for many years without thinking of marriages. [You won't buy a dress if don't try it on to see if it fits you.  Then you would prefer to pick another one that has not been used!  Human nature for you.] Co-habitation and premarital sex is discouraged in China. Single moms won't [too informal here] do not receive any support from the Government. An illegitimate child is not legally protected actually. The kid child will encounter a million of troubles myriad host of problems in getting education, careers and medical treatment. besides contempt Worst, the disdain and stigma from society. This is because his chance of acquiring a H ??? is slim. Without it, no Chinese can't can do things smoothly. get along without it. It is often reported that Chinese girls are abandoned. deserted; Of course divorce, abortion and one night stands are nothing new. Chinese therefore have no confidence in interracial /marriage What is there to guarantee that an interracial marriage would be more stable? Interracial marriages carry another extra burden of new problems.

What's your opinion about on this topic? You are most welcome to join in the discussion.

Good content.  However, in such essays, you need to have more confidence in your opinion.  Don't use words like, "I think".  Either you state directly or use "I believe" instead.  Remember your essay is read by people all over the world.  If you use some local terms such as an "H", we don't know what it is.  You need to explain.  If you don't, just omit them.

View of exotic love and cross-border marriage(part two）

First, Chinese are more implicit and constrained, not showing passion easily, few promises. In contrast, foreigners are straight-forward and open. Have you ever heard "I love you" lingering on a Chinese guy's lips? Doing is better than saying.
Second, Chinese are used to living and working in peace and contentment. It is hard for them to leave their homeland or comfort zones. On the other hand, foreigners prefer something new and adventurous. They don't think moving to another home is a tough matter and even enjoy it. However, Chinese have an old saying: One moving makes you poor for 3 years.
Last, Chinese think life should go like this: love-marriage sex. Loyalty and faithfulness are essential to happiness. Cheating, breaking up and divorce bring shame. These ideas are stamped on our ideas, just like many a man married only a virgin in the past, the fewer relationships, the better (attitudes are changing, though). While foreigners go this way: sex-love-marriage or co-habitation for many years without thinking of marriage. Co-habitation and premarital sex are discouraged in China. Single moms won't receive any support from the government. An illegitimate child is not legally protected, actually. The kid will encounter a millions of troubles getting an education, careers and medical treatment, besides receiving contempt. Because his chance of acquiring an H [?] is slim. Chinese can't get along without it. It is often reported that Chinese girls are deserted; divorce, abortion and one night stands are nothing new. Chinese therefore have no confidence in interracial marriage.
What's your opinion about this topic? Welcome to join in the discussion.

[Good work.  Since the U.S. has so people of so many different nationalities, the attitude towards interracial marriage is much more relaxed.  It still comes up, but less and less so with each passing year.]

First, Chinese are more implicit and reserved. constraint, not showing passion easily, few promises [These are useless repeats.  If you are trying to emphasize, use a different way.  For example, "Confucuianism says that "One can be a beast in the room but always a gentleman outside its confines"] In contrast, foreigners are straight forward and open. [you can also use "direct and blunt"] [Have you] Ever heard of "I love you" lingering on a lips of a Chinese male guy's lips? [In the movies? :) ] Doing is better than saying. Action is better than words.

Second, [Try not to use these words, this sounds you are lecturing and not opining] Chinese are used to living and working in peace and contentment. [This is untrue, all humans are like this or the other extreme.  Don't forget there are thousands of Chinese went abroad to work and seek fortunes.  If not for the Communist took over, many would have returned earlier to the homeland. Use something that is hard to refute when describing some negative aspect of race.  This can be a very touchy issue.] By tradition, Chinese believe that if one dies in a faraway place, their soul will forever be wandering searching for home.  Some beliefs are It is hard to die.  for them to leave his homeland or comfort zones. On the other hand, foreigners prefer something new and exciting adventures. They don't think moving house is a tough matter and even enjoys it. [This is not true.  Moving house as oppose to travelling is #1 cause of stress in the US.  #2 is divorce] and they are more adventurous.  [The young are always adventurous because they have nothing.  People like me now prefers to stay in one spot because of stable jobs and a place of comfort to live].  However, The Chinese have an old saying: "One moving makes you poor for 3 three years." [也有, 讀萬卷書不如行千里路, Reading ten thousand books is not the same as travelling a thousand miles]