What happened today? Today's Happening

Well, [You don't write this in a formal essay.  It is a filler so that you buy some time for your brain to process your next thoughts.  It is fine if used in speech, dialog etc.  However, if you want your essay to be in a light and speechy way, then it is ok and you need to change the general tone of the essay.]there isn't much to say since it's 5:21pm twenty-one past five p.m. [Too formal.  I am correcting this essay in a light and fun tone] Today I got up very late becuase last night I went to bed slept late. The reason? I was reading The Casual Vacancy, the new novel of from J.K Rowling;  tha author of You know, the lady who wrote Harry Potter.

The This novel is not for adults not children because it contains many dirty adult swear words and explicit scenes. Nevertheless, I love the novel. Today, I've been editing one of my short stories that I've been writing. [understood] that I had written write since I was 19. For the time beingbieng, I'm just practising toying with very little things bits and pieces and simple stories. One day I'd like to become a good author like J.K Rowling.

I have had created a literal literary blogspot. and, in There, I publish all the things write everything I had written - , even poems in English and in Spanish. However, I'm a bad translator, that's why hence I don't translate any of the my tales into English. But Hopefully, one day I would like everyone to can read them.

The story I'm editing is about a young man that who ["who" is for human beings and "that" for everything else]recentrly lost his fiancee-actress who were an actress. In During the middle heat of arguments - love, desperation and pressure, cause the relation to ends up in a tragedy in which, whereby the these two main characters suffer, to be separated, and a horrible horrific destiny awaited them. The tragedy takes part mainly because of grew/stemmed from a misunderstanding the hero had.  young man has, and He does what he has at hand tried to get his beloved fiancee back. But that has However, there is a heavy price to be paid; a terrible price...  . And very high.

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What happened today?

Well, there isn't much to say since it's only twenty-one past five. Today I got up very late because last night I went to bed late. I was reading The Casual Vacancy, the new novel by J.K Rowling, the author of Harry Potter. The novel is for adults not children because it contains many dirty words and explicit scenes. Nevertheless, I love the novel. Today, I've been editing one of my short stories that I've been writing. I have written since I was 19. For the time being, I'm just practising with very little things and simple stories. One day I'd like to become a good author like J.K Rowling.
I have created a literal blogspot and, in there, I publish all the things write, even poems in English and in Spanish. I'm a bad translator, that's why I don't translate any of the tales to English. But one day I would like everyone to read them.
The story I'm editing is about a young man that recently lost his fiancee who was an actress. In the middle of arguments, love, desperation and pressure, the relation ends up in a tragedy in which, these two main characters suffer, separately, a horrible destiny. The tragedy takes part mainly because of a misunderstanding the young man has, and he uses what he has at hand to get his beloved fiancee back. But that has a price. And it is very high.