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Just about everything Hello my friends, I’ll be very thankful to you if you help me to correct my mistakes in this text. I have to say I wrote it because I wanted to practice some new vocabulary for me, like: 1) Providing that 2) In spite of 3) In case 4) Occasionally 5) Arrangement 6) Make an appointment 7) Spicy 8) Bake and some sentences of this text can sound strange, so if you have any idea how to say better please let me know about this way. I hope for your help and if you’ll have questions about Russian feel free to ask me, It’s a pleasure to help you with foreign language. Peace out! Just about everything What am I thinking about? What am I going to do in the future? Well, it’s not an easy question, especially providing that I’m so young and I haven’t decided yet what I’d like to do and what’s going to be interesting for me in a few years. So in spite of I don’t know my future interests I can say exactly what I like doing at these days. I really like eating, and it’s my a tiny secret  but in spite of it I’m not a fat man, on the contrary I’m too thin. So I like cooking a little, I’m not a big fanatic of it but I, yes, I do this occasionally. Especially I’m good at baking a cake or smth like that. In case there is nothing to do I just go for a walk with some friends, occasionally play football or tennis, I’m quite keen on playing it. If I had an arrangement with my friends to meet we usually go to the cinema or park and another places. I’m from Abkhazia and there’re many people who like savoury spicy food, but to be honest don’t like it, I couldn’t say I hate it but I eat spicy food very seldom. In case I’m at home, I mean in Abkhazia, I usually eat Russian food (like borsh for example  )because of my mother, she is a Russian woman. What’s more I used to be keen on medicine, I mean I used to be interested on it, but these days I don’t because of a dentist I made an appointment. I know it sounds a little strange but after that was afraid of everything related to medicine.

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Hello friends. I’ll be very thankful if you can help me to correct my mistakes in this text. I wrote this because I wanted to practice on some new vocabulary:


Some sentences ofin this text may sound strange. If you have better ways, please show me. Thanks for your help and if you have any question on Russian, please feel free to ask. It’s my pleasure. 


What am I thinking about? What am I going to do in the future? Well, not an easy question, especially when I’m young and inexperienced.  I have yet to decide what I’d like to do and what’s going to would be interesting for me in a the next few years. So In spite of I don’t not knowing what my future interests, I can say tell you exactly what I like to doing at these days. I really like eating, and it’s my a tiny little secret. Thankfully, I’m not a fat. man, On the contrary, I’m too skinny thin. So I like to cooking but a little. I’m not a big fanatic of it no fan but I, yes, I do this it occasionally. Especially Still, I’m good at baking; a cake perhaps. or smth like that. In case If there is nothing to do, I just go for a walk with some friends, play an occasionally play game of football or tennis. I’m quite a keen player on playing it. If I had an arrangement with Also when meeting up with my friends, to meet we usually go to the cinema movies or to some park for respite and another places.

 

I’m from Abkhazia and there’re many people there who like savoury spicy food. but to be honestly, I don’t. Can't say I hate it but I eat spicy food very seldom do I savour them. In case if I’m at home, I mean in Abkhazia, I usually eat Russian food, like borsh because of my mother, she is a Russian woman. What’s more, I used to be in medicine but these days, no longer.  It is because of a dental appointment. I know it sounds a little strange but after that appointment, I was afraid of everything anything that relates to medicine.

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