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Lonely Saturday
Today I stayed home alone all day long alone.
My sister went to a concert and my parents went to my grandparents' home.
I decided to go to a the bookstore, but, I didn't go because it was raining.
My mom had cooked for me and left. I ate the meal for lunch and dinner.
It has been a while to stay have been home alone for a while.
My mom was always here and would took care of me.
I might think that is so natural.
It is a little lonely for me to spend saturday by myself.
Although I had much a lot homework to do, I didn't feel like doing them it.
Many of my friends live by themselves.
When I thought think of their lives, I was am envious because they seemed to be very independent adults.
But, I felt as though they might not have had any be proud of themselves as for being an independent adult.
They might have been fighting with their lonely and boring daily lives.
My family hasn't come back yet.
I am too so bored!
I am waiting for them now.
Lonely Saturday
Today I stayed home alone all day long alone.
My sister went to a concert, and my parents went to my grandparents' house.
I wanted to go to a bookstore, but, I didn't go because it was raining.
My mom had cooked for me and left. I ate the meal for lunch and dinner. This sentence sounds a little strange. Maybe you can say, It was enough for lunch and dinner. Or, I split the meal for lunch and dinner. Or I had it for lunch and dinner.
It has been a while to stay home alone. It has been a while since I stayed home alone.
My mom was always here and took care of me.
I might think that is so natural. This doesn't make sense either. What do you want to say? ^3^
It is a little lonely for me to spend saturday by myself.
Although I had much homework to do, I didn't feel like doing them it.
Many of my friends live by themselves.
When I thought ofabout their lives, I was used to be envious because they seemed to be very independent adults.
But, I felt that they might not have had any proud of pride in themselves as an independent adult. It sounds more comfortable to say: However, I then felt that they might not be proud of themselves as adults. OR I felt that they might not have pride in themselves as adults.
They might have been fighting with their lonely and boring daily lives.
My family hasn't come yet.
I am so bored !
I am waiting for them now.
Very good writing! :3
Lonely Saturday
Today I stayed home alone all day.
My sister went to a concert, and my parents went to my grandparents' home.
I decided to go to a bookstore, but, I didn't because it was raining.
My mom had cooked for me and left. I ate the meal for lunch and dinner.
It has been a while I've stayed home alone.
My mom was always here and took care of me.
I might think that is natural.
It is a little lonely for me to spend saturday by myself.
Although I had much homework to do, I didn't feel like doing it.
Many of my friends live by themselves.
When I thought of their lives, I was envious because they seemed to be very independent adults.
But, I felt they might not have been proud of themselves as independent adults.
They might have been fighting with their lonely and boring daily lives.
My family hasn't come yet.
I am too bored !
I am waiting for them now.
Lonely Saturday
Today I stayed at home all day long, alone.
My sister went to a concert and my parents went to my grandparents' home.
I decided to go to a bookstore, but I didn't go because it was raining.
My mom had cooked for me and left. I ate the meal for lunch and dinner.
It has been a while to stay home alone.
My mom was always here and took care of me.
I might think that is so natural.
It is a little lonely for me to spend saturday by myself.
Although I had much homework to do, I didn't feel like doing it.
Many of my friends live by themselves.
When I thought of their lives, I was envious because they seemed to be very independent adults.
But, I felt they might not be proud of themselves as an independent adult.
They might have been fighting with their lonely and boring daily lives.
My family hasn't come home yet.
I am so bored!
I am waiting for them now.
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