"Will-power" pls correct my super-short essay

"Whatever you are doing which takes effort such as playing sport, music, or language learning.

The hardest thing and the most important thing is to continue. and to continue, you need a will-power.

You can’t complain about the quality of your text book nor your teacher.

Those external factors are all secondary. The key is will-power."


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"Willpower" pls correct my super-short essay

"Whatever you are doing that takes effort, be it playing sports, music, or language learning, the hardest thing and the most important thing is to continue - and to continue, you need willpower.

You can’t complain about the quality of your textbook or your teacher.

External factors are all secondary. The key is willpower.


I'd appreciate it if you could correct the above! Thank you!

willpower goes together

I put the separate sentences together because they work better that way.

words like willpower, love, hate aren't countable, so no "a" is needed.

"following" refers to things that come after.

You are absolutely right about what you say. The method isn't as important as the work. But I'll add that if you have a good method you can speed up your learning a lot. The Japanese education system for example provides a bad method for learning English.

"Will-power" please correct my super-short essay

"Whatever you are doing which takes effort, playing sport, music, or language learning.

The hardest thing and the most important thing is to continue, and to continue, you need a will-power.

You can’t complain about the quality of your textbook nor your teacher.

Those external factors are all secondary. The key is will-power."


I'd appreciate if you could correct the following! Thank you!

Good job, young man. :)