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Hello))) I'm writing topic aboum city. Can you help me with corrections? Winter Olympic games in a subtropical climate. Sochi is the south capital of Russia. Its extent on 145 kilometers along coast of the Black sea. There is a warm sea, mountains, the beautiful nature, the rivers and falls and a soft climate in Sochi, Unique of this city in a geographical position and a subtropical climate. You can swim in the sea and in 40 minutes later we can get to mountains, we will see a winter scenery, to ski and a snowboard. This compactness has helped to win carrying out of the Winter Olympic games in the summer 2006 at session the IOC in Gvatemala. The best season in Sochi is autumn, especially September. The sea still warm, is a lot of sunny days, the air temperature air is more cool than in August and less tourists. Welcome to Sochi!!!

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Hello))) I'm writing topic aboum city. Can you help me with corrections?

Winter Olympics games in a In Subtropical Climate.

Sochi is the southern capital of Russia. Its extent It is located along on the 145 kilometers along coastline of the Black sea. There is a warm sea, This part of the Black Sea is warm.  There are mountains , the beautiful nature, the rivers, waterfalls,  and falls and a soft the climate in Sochi is temperate (or you can use "mild"), Unique of this city in a geographical position and a subtropical climate. You can One may swim in the sea and within 40 minutes of travel,  later we can get to mountains, we will see a winter scenery, to ski and a snowboard. one can find himself in the wintry conditions of the mountains to ski and snowboard.

This compactness of the area has helped to win carrying out of the bid for the Winter Olympics games in the summer 2006 venue at the 2006 summer session of the IOC International Olympics Committee in Gvatemala Guatemala.


The best season in Sochi is autumn, especially in September. The Sea is still warm, is a lot of and there are many sunny days.  The air temperature air is more cooler than in August and and there are less fewer tourists.


Welcome to Sochi!!!

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Hello))) I'm writing topic aboum city. Can you help me with corrections?

Winter Olympic games in a subtropical climate.

Sochi is on the south capital of Russia. It extents  145 kilometers along the coast of the   Black sea. It is a warm sea, mountains where there is the beautiful nature, the rivers and falls and a soft climate in Sochi, Unique of this city in a geographical position and a subtropical climate. You can swim in the sea and in 40 minutes  you will climb up to  the mountains and see a winter scenery, to ski and a snowboard.
   This compactness has helped to win carrying out of the Winter Olympic games in the summer 2006 at session the IOC in Gvatemala.
   The best season in Sochi is autumn, especially in September,in which the air temperature  is more cool than in August with less tourists. The sea is still warm on so much sunny days .

Welcome to Sochi!!!

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