Visiting Madrid,Could you correct it? thank´s!
Hello Mark,Joe and Susan,
I´m glad to hear from you again.Your mother told me yesterday that you´re going to travel to Spain this winter.
Let´s see.You should come to Madrid.Madrid is the biggest and oldest city of Spain and also I´m here!.
I know a little central hotel very comfortable and beautiful,besides the fact that it´s unexpensive and reliable.The hotel recepcion is openning from 2 am to 23 pm so when you arrive it will be open.
I´ve been planning many things to do with you.On the Saturday morning we can go to the park close to the hotel,there there is a promenade by te Manzanares River where we can stroll for half and hour and enjoy with the landscapes of Madrid.
To saturday afternoon,I´ve bought four tickets for the match between Real Madrid and Barcelona at the Santiago Bernabeu Stadium.
After the match and before nightfall,I want someone take a picture to four of us by the Neptuno Fountain and later we´ll go to dinner to Rubayat in taxi.
I´m looking forward to see you soon.
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Visiting Madrid,Could you correct it? Thanks!
Hello Mark, Joe, and Susan,
I´m glad to hear from you again. Your mother told me yesterday that you're going to travel to Spain this winter.
Let´s see. You should come to Madrid. Madrid is the biggest and oldest city in Spain, and it's where I am!
I know a little central hotel which is very comfortable and beautiful. Besides, it's inexpensive and reliable. The hotel reception is open from 2 am to 23 pm, so when you arrive, it will be open.
I´ve been planning many things that we can do together. On the Saturday morning we can go to the park close to the hotel. There is a promenade by the Manzanares River where we can stroll for half an hour, and enjoy with the landscapes of Madrid.
For Saturday afternoon, I´ve bought four tickets for the match between Real Madrid and Barcelona at the Santiago Bernabeu Stadium.
After the match but before nightfall, I want someone to take a picture of the four of us by the Neptuno Fountain, and later we´ll go to dinner at the Rubayat in a taxi.
I´m looking forward to seeing you soon.
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