You did very well on this. I had to change a few words around to correct sentence structure.  I'm not even sure if I corrected this properly.  I tried to alter the text as little as possible.  Hope it helped

Self-Introduction in a Resume（I need your help to correct all my faults）

I am a good and active learner.  I am a good listener and will express my ideas over time.  I have a strong sense of responsibility and will complete the assigned task perfectly.  I am good working with teams, while I have my own unique ideas.  I have the courage to surpass myself.
In the future, I will work with passion and study with humility all the tine.
（本人有较强的学习能力，能主动学习，刻苦专研；善于倾听并能适时的表达自己的想法；有很强的责任感，能完成所分配的任务；有良好的团队意识；有自己独特的想法，勇于超越自我。
在未来的工作中，我将以充沛的精力，刻苦钻研的精神工作，不断地提升自己的工作能力，认真负责地完成工作。
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