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How many mistakes in my letter? Please correct it I know you can be too lazy and busy! I understand it and also I'm thinking that it's a usual situation in our daily life! We have a limited possibility for communication because you're too far. But I'm very very glad that you remember about our friendship! Your visit in Russia been too short and it was really funny time! Actually you wanted to show me Aus... ahaha it was just my thought... Ok, let's talk about my application and other documents for visa. When you gonna flight back to home in Aus? I remember you'll stay in Canada till february... That's why I think it's a very early time for making my documents for australian visa. Probably in 1 month I must begin to do something for a travel... What you think about it?????????? See you buddy....... From Russia with love ahahahhaha :))) Sorry for my english

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How many mistakes are in my letter?  Please correct it.

I know what it's like to be too lazy and too busy!  I understand it and also I'm thinking that this is a common situation in our daily life! We have a very few chances to communicate because you live so far away. Still, I'm very very glad that you remember about our friendship! Your visit to Russia was too short but it was really fun! Actually you wanted to show me Australia... ahaha or maybe it was just wishful thinking.

Ok, let's talk about my application and other documents for a Visa. When are you going to take a flight back home to Ausralia? I remember you said you'd be staying in Canada untill February... That's why I think it's still early enough to prepare my documents for an Australian Visa.
One month from now I should probably get serious about planing for travel...
What do you think about that?
See you buddy.......
From Russia with love aha ha ha ha :))) Sorry for my English

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