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my dream
Though,I am only at age of 27. i feel i am very old. why ? because i have not been married.
In my hometown, most of gilrs have been married before the age of 27. I am an old girl now. i am very agony for this. my parents are also anxious about it. They always ask me do you have boyfriend.But i haven't .
My dream is that i have a boyfriend and get married with him. I love him and he loves me.
I am not ugly ,people often say that i am a good girl. Why i have not boyfriend. It is strange.
I am determined to write one composition every week until i find my MR RIGHT.
Girl, the right one is on the way. You need to do is waiting for him and be patient.
Correction:
My Dream
Although I am only twenty seven years old, I feel as if I am very old. Why? Because I am not married.
In my hometown, most of the girls have been married before twenty seven years old. I am an old girl now. Because of this, I am very anxious. My parents are also anxious about me getting married. They always ask me if I have a boyfriend yet, but I don't.
My dream is to have a boyfriend and get married to him. A relationship where I love him and he loves me. I am not ugly, people often say that I look good. So, why haven't I found a boyfriend? It's strange.
I am determined to write one notebook entry every week until I find my MR RIGHT.
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