Mexico's Hurricanes season

Mexico and the Hurricanes

In Mexico it’s hurricane season. It's been raining nonstop since last week rains don't stop yet. We had 2 hurricanes, one in the Ocean Pacific Pacific Ocean and the second one in the Gulf of Mexico. Each year between the months of June and November hurricanes are formed. Also it´s They also form when the weather it´s is so hot and that the ocean water come to have reaches temperatures of above 25 celsius.

The Hurricane, by itself it´s a is nature's blessing because it brings to us several rains, and the rivers and lakes turn into go from having no water to having a lot of water. Some people suffer with because of the rain, especially poor people, as they tend to live in marginalized zones in the forest or in the country, when where they don’t have the materials or money to make build quality houses. Their houses are made with of cardboard and little pieces of wood, then when it´s raining it rains the houses are destroyed by the wind and water. Unfortunately some of them die and survivors see themselves are forced to stay remain isolated without potable water and or edible food, because the only way by land to get to them it's is inaccessible; only by air can the Red Cross and other institutions can travel to give them water and food.
In Mexico we have a "The Disaster Culture" and the Federal Government it has a plan especially designed for this these cases. The plan is called DN3 and it consists in that the Army takes taking control over of all situations, and the civil authorities are subordinated to the Army passed to second term. In hours are built assistance camps are built, landing places to for helicopters and landing strips runways for other aircraft. In this these cases the Mexican people have truly have faith in Mexico, and the nationalism and solidarity in all the Mexican Territory throughout the country are very high.

Great description, Quimet. I had never heard of Mexico's "Disaster Culture" or "Culture of Disaster" before reading your entry. One tip for you:  remember that the contraction "it's" is really "it is" combined into one word. Therefore it is redundant to write, for example, "The only way by land to get to them IT'S inaccessible" and "The hurricane by itself IT'S nature's blessing." IT is a substitute for the subject or object of a sentence, and completely replaces the stated subject or object. In the first sentence, "it" would replace "the only way by land," which is the grammatical subject. In the second sentence, "it" would replace "the hurricane." But you can't have both "it" and the subject or object that it replaces together in one sentence. If you have the entire subject or object, you can't also have "it." Likewise, if you have "it" you can't also have the subject or object that it represents.

Overall, I think your English is definitely becoming more natural and confident. Very good work.

Mexico's Hurricanes season

Mexico and the Hurricanes

In Mexico it’s Hurricane season. Since last week the rains haven't stopped yet. We had 2 hurricanes, one in the Ocean Pacific and the second one in the Gulf of Mexico. Each year between months June and November hurricanes are formed. Also it´s when the weather is so hot and the ocean water comes to have temperatures above 25 celcius.

The Hurricane, by itself is a nature blessing because it brings to us lots of water and the rivers and lakes turn from no water to a lot of water. Some people suffers from the rain, especially poor people, they live in margined zones in the forest or in the country when they don’t have materials or money to make quality houses. Their houses are made with cardboard and little pieces of wood, then when it´s raining the houses are destroyed by the wind and water, unfortunately some of them die and survivors see themselves forced to stay isolated without potable water and food, because the only way by land to get to them is inaccessible, only by air the Red Cross and other institutions can go to give them water and food.
In Mexico we have "The Disaster’s Culture" and the Federal Government has a plan especially designed for this cases. The plan is called DN3 and consist in that the Army takes control over all situations, and the civil authorities are passed to second term. In hours assistance camps are built, landing places for helicopters and landing runways for aircrafts. In this cases the Mexican people have true faith in Mexico, and the nationalism and solidarity in all the Mexican Territory are very high.

Well done, I just changed a few things to make it sound more natural but most of it was alright.