First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hi friends of all over the world. I access to this comunity because i want that my english be better. I'm 16 years old and i'm uruguayan.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi friends from all over the world. I've come to this comunity because I want to improve my English ability. I'm 16 years old and I'm Uruguayan.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi friends from all over the world. I ~~access to~~ joined this comunity because i want ~~that my english be bette~~r to improve my English. I'm 16 years old and ~~i'm uruguayan~~ I come from Uruguay.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi friends of all over the world. I joined this community to improve my english. I'm 16 years old and I'm uruguayan.

thanks, the problem is that i'm new here and (no se como funciona) but, thanks for you comment and help.

If you're satisfied with the help here and are no longer interested in corrections you can remove this notebook entry from your notebook - or leave a note in comments about that. You've reposted a corrected entry - so I think you're showing that you don't need more corrections? Hmmm.

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