Diary*Looking for Correction
Nothing special happened today. It kept raining all day which made the air fresh and comfortable to smell. I think that I need to improve my business English communication skills,for my colleges keep sending me English email,but I can only use Chinese to reply them,it is very unprofessional.
I need to buy some gifts for my family numbers, the day after tomorrow I will leave Beijing and go home.
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Diary*Looking for Correction
Nothing special happened today. It kept raining all day which made the air fresh and *nice to smell. I think that I need to improve my business English communication skills because my colleges keeps sending me English email,but I can only use Chinese to reply them,it is very unprofessional.
I need to buy some gifts for my family members. *The day after tomorrow I will leave Beijing and go home.
*or you could write "I need to buy some gifts for my family members because day after tomorrow I will leave Beijing and go home." Using the word "because" connects the two thoughts together.
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