Dear Anna,

I hope everything goes well with you and your family. I am sorry that I have not been wirtten to you recently. It was because I was busy with my new job.

As you know, my last job was to work as a game tester working for at the biggest game company in Fuzhou. I was a game tester worked more than ten hours a day and the salary was not so good. There was no chance I could get a promotion and an increase in salary, so I post my vita on some job agency websites. Luckily I received a call from another game company named IGG. They were looking for a senior tester who could lead the tester team. I was nervous on the interview, but finally I got the job. The work time is shorter and the salary is better. The most important thing is that I can put my ablitily to good use. The new job is keeping me busy but I am happier than before.

I have to stop here. Tomorrow is my mom's brithday. I am going to the mall to buy her a gift.

Best regards!

Liz

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Hi Liz,

Very clean tone and simple sentences.  Quite nicely written!  I have a couple of comments on your writing style:

1)  You have a few run-on sentences. 

2)  Do you mean a resume or a CV when you said "vita"?

Take care.

W.

A WRITING TASK

You have recently started work in a new conpay.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
1.expain why you changed jobs
2.describe your new job
3.tell him/her your other news
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Dear Anna,

I hope everything goes is well with you and your family. I am sorry that I have not been wirtten written to you recently,; it was because I was busy with my new job.

As you know, my last job was working for the biggest game company in Fuzhou,.   I was a game tester, worked working more than ten hours a day and the salary was not so good. There was no chance I could get a promotion and an increase in salary, so I posted my vita CV on some job agency websites. Luckily, I received a call from another game company named IGG,. They were looking for a senior tester who could lead the tester team. I was nervous on the interview, but finally I get got the job. The work time day is shorter, and the aslary salary is better, and the most important thing is that I can put my ablitily to good use. The new job is keeping me busy but I am happier than before.

I have to stop here. Tomorrow is my mom's brithday,.  I am going to the mall to buy her a gift.

Best regards!

Liz