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Lazy Man Hi, everyone, it’s Ken23e. My friends and I had played mahjong all through the night from 10pm to 7am, so I’ve been tired yet despite having a few hours rest. We usually play mahjong with betting money, but the exchange ratio is always quite low. Therefore, there’s no sense of urgency but a lot of smile and laughing.^^ Actually, I won 160 Japanese Yen only in total. We rested for an hour after the last game was over, and then, we headed off to home. My wife looked more or less frustrated because of my lazy all the day. Of course I know that’s natural^^; みなさん、こんばんは、Ken23eです。昨日の午後10時から今朝の7時まで、友達と徹夜でずっとマージャンをしていたので、2-3時間休憩したにも関わらずまだ疲れが取れません。いつもお金を賭けるのですが、レートは相当低いです。なので緊張感は全然ありませんが、笑顔と笑い声は絶えません。^^現に私は合計160円しか勝っていません。最後の半荘が終わったあと1時間寝てから家路に着きました。私が終日だらけていたので、妻は多少不機嫌そうでした。もちろんそれが普通ですよね。^^;

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Lazy Man

Hi, everyone, it’s Ken23e. My friends and I had played mahjong all through the entire night from 10pm to 7am, so I’ve been tired yet despite having a few hours rest. We usually bet money while playing mahjong, but the pots are always quite low. Therefore, there’s no worry but a lot of smiling and laughing.^^ Actually, I only won 160 Japanese Yen in total. We rested for an hour after the last game was over, and then we headed off to home. My wife looked more or less frustrated because of my laziness all the day. Of course I know that’s natural^^;

Sounds just like an american poker night to me!

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Hi, everyone, it’s Ken23e. My friends and I had played mahjong all through the night, from 10pm to 7am, so I've I'm still tired yet despite having a few hours rest. We usually play mahjong with betting money, but the exchange ratio is always quite low. Therefore, there’s no sense of urgency tension, but just a lot of smiles and laughing laughter. ^^ Actually, I won only 160 Japanese Yen only in total. We rested for an hour after the last game was over, and then, we headed off to home. My wife looked more or less frustrated because of my being lazy all the day. Of course, I know that’s natural that's to be expected. ^^;

私はこう訂正します^^
I put actual corrections in red, and things that are maybe like more natural suggestions in blue.
お役に立てれば幸いです^^

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