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Part 1
She woke up too soon [There is a difference between using "soon" and "early" in this context]. At 6:30 am she opened the balcony door of balcony and she went out to smell the wind. "Today will be a great day."[or "It will be a great day today"/"What a great day it will be today"- she smiled at her thought, and smiled. She had been staying this day For many days, it was like this. Suddendly, she noticed she had to make many things to be done before by 5:00pm.
But She hoped that today would will be another perfect one. , and She decided to stop paused and to think what started to think what she have to make. While she was thinking it pondering, a small and pale looking boy went came out of the dark dangerous forest. He was crying. She questioned him: asked, "What's wrongdo you happen?"
The boy He didn't answer and she ran out towards him to help him.
" "What do Why are you do here? Where are your parents?"-,
The boy went silentmute, he didn't speak. On seeing this, she introduced herself,
"I live in a big near the forest, on a hill. how have Where are you from come here?"
The sad little boy began... started to speak and he said: I'll tell you my story...
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