My Summer

Time flew fast. Nearly a whole month has passed and the summer will end soon. I was too lazy and didn't do much reading. This made me to feel a bit nervous and worried about my new life; that is, I will returning to being a student after having left campus for such a long time.

However, there are some amazing changes that have happened.

One is that I have finally found a new model of getting along with my parents, which was the only problem that I felt was hopeless to solve.
I understood a lot of social norms more clearly in the last few days. Similarly, I suddenly realised that I had too much of an idealistic view of my parents. I can now finally get rid of the negative power of the Chinese religion, and things like filial piety. I feel much stronger.

Another is that I don't have to be carnivorous. I had never had any interest in vegetables. At most, I just didn't mind having some when they were on the table. Last week I had a fever for several days, and one day during it when I ate some meat, unexpectedly, I felt my stomach hurting a lot and I felt like vomiting during the whole afternoon. This happened again the next day. I suddenly found it would help me recover if I just ate vegetables. I finally found that my dad cooks vegetables wonderfully, and that he is not just good at cooking meat and fish. I began to miss the flavour of the fried vegetables he cooks. This feeling I had never emerged in the past. It is a good thing that I can quit the addiction of eating meat. It is healthier for me.


Thirdly, but more trivially, I went swimming several times. My swimming skill has been improving over the last fours years. I didn't make special efforts to do so, and never had any great expectations. At first when I taught myself swimming, I felt it was so hard and I didn't even think I would make it some day. Naturally (As usual?), things have changed. This change gives me a lot of confidence about “time”. I used to be impatient about results. I easily got disappointed easily if I didn't experience success in a period I could predict. Now I think I can wait. I don't need to measure time just by days or months, but by years as well.
Likewise, my "friendship" is steadily growing stronger and stronger. I think I am a lucky girl.
Besides, because of swimming, my flesh (skin?) is getting firmer. I have never had protuberant muscles before, but now I can see a six pack of abdominal muscles, and the shape of my waist is nearly perfect. I want to find some ways to avoid it changing into fat when I am busy at university and don't have time to do exercises.

Note: "a six pack of abdominal muscles"-- you can simply say "a six pack" because it refers to abdominal muscles.

Good work!

My Summer

Time flied flew too fast. Unconsciously I have passed nearly a One whole month went by and the summer will end soon end. I was too so lazy and didn't do much reading. This made me to feel a bit nervous and worried about my new life. that is I will A returning to be a student soon to be after leaving campus for such a long absence from the campus time. [Nothing wrong with your sentence, just to vary things a bit.]

However, there are were some amazing changes happened.

One is that I Finally I have begun to find a new model way of handling and getting along with my parents., which was the only A most vexing problem that I thought was impossible  felt hopeless to solve.  I understood a lot of social things more soberly In the last past days, I began to resolve many social problems I faced. Similarly, I suddenly realised that I used to be was too idealistic towards with my parents. I can now finally able get rid of the negative aspects of traditions such as  power of the Chinese religion-like: filial piety. [忠孝是好傳統但愚忠愚孝就不是了。例如君要臣死, 臣不得不死, 父要子忘子不得不忘. 若無忠孝華夏化就與古希腊埃及一样...] I feel much stronger.

Another is that I can be not just carnivorous. Another is that I wanted to be a vegetarian but I had never had any interest in eating vegetables. At most I just didn't don't mind having some when they were on table. Last week I had a fever for several days and one day during it when I ate had some meat, unexpectedly, I felt my stomach hurting a lot very much and I felt like vomitting in the whole afternoon. This happened again the next day. I suddenly found realized that it would help me recover if I just ate have vegetables. I finally found discovered that my dad can cooks a mean dish of vegetables but poor at  wonderfully, and he is not just good at cooking meat and fish. I began to miss the flavour of for the stir-fried-vegetables he makes cooks. This feelingI had have never emerged had this feeling in the past. It is a good thing A wonderful way to lessen my dependence on that I can quit the addiction of meat. Besides, it is more healthier for me.

My Summer

Time flew by fast. Unconsciously I have not been paying attention for nearly a whole month and the summer will end soon. I was too lazy and didn't do much reading. This made me to feel a bit nervous and worried about my new life, that is I will return to be a student after leaving campus for such a long time.

However, there have been some important changes.

One is that I finally have begun to find a new way (maybe 'model' is okay or better) of getting along with my parents, which was the only problem that I felt hopeless to solve.
I understood a lot of social things more soberly in the last past days. Similarly, I suddenly realised that I used to be too idealistic towards my parents. I can now finally get rid of what I see as a negative aspect of Chinese religion: filial piety. I feel much stronger.

Another is that I realized that I can be not be only carnivorous. I had never had any interest in vegetables. At most I didn't mind having some when they were on the table. Last week I had a fever for several days and one day during it when I ate some meat, unexpectedly, I felt my stomach hurting a lot and I felt like vomitting for the whole afternoon. This happened again the next day. I suddenly found it would help me recover if I just ate vegetables. I finally found that my dad cooks vegetables wonderfully, and he is not just good at cooking meat and fish. I began to miss the flavour of his fried-vegetables. This feeling never emerged in me in the past. It is a good thing that I can quit the addiction of meat. It is more healthy for me.


Thirdly but more trivially, I went swimming several times. My swimming skill has improved in the last four years. I didn't give special effort to it and never had too much expectation. When I first began to teach myself to swim, I felt it was too hard and I didn't even think I could acquire this skill. But as you see, this as proven not to be true. This change gives me a lot of confidence about “time”. I used to be impatient about results. I easily got disappointed if I couldn't see success in a period I could presume. Now I think I can wait. I don't need to measure time just by day or month, but by years.
Alike, my "friendship" is going more and more tight steadily. I think I am a lucky girl.
Besides, because of swimming, my flesh becomes more compact. I have never had protuberant muscle before, but now I can see six bucks of abdominal muscle and the shape of my waist is nearly perfect. I want to find some ways to avoid it changing into fat (I don't think that's possible)* when I am busy at university and don't have time to do exercises.

*(Fat and muscle are gained and lost through seperate processes. One can't change into the other. They are composed of different things. Fat is a lipid, muscles are from proteins, vitamins...fat is not even composed of cells. I don't think it's living tissue as muscles are.)

Thirdly but more trivially, Then I went swimming several times. My swimming skill was being It had been improved in the last fours years. I didn't make any special effort on it and never made nor had any expectation. At first when It was self taught myself swimming, I and felt it was so difficult that I thought that I would never make it through. hard and I didn't even think I can make it some day. Naturally things have changed. This These changes gives me a lot of gave me confidence about “time” and realized the power of time and patience. I used to be impatient about results. I easily get easily disappointed when if I don't see things happening fast. couldn't see the success in a period I could presume. Now I think believe I can wait. I don't need to measure time just by days or by months, but by years. [I would have written as, "Measure time not by days or months but by years for everlasting success"]

Alike, my "friendship" Finally friendships have been blossoming well. is going more and more tight steadily. I think I am a lucky girl. Besides, because of With all the swimming, my flesh becomes more compact [Chinglish] I am getting more toned. I have never had protuberant No muscle was visible before, but now I can see a proud owner of a six pack bucks of abdominal muscle and the shape of my waist is nearly ideal for me.  perfect. I want need to find some ways to avoid maintain what I have gained.  I don't want to lose when things get too busy at the university.  changing into fat when I am busy at university and don't have time to do exercises

Good essay.  Need to learn to steer away from your Chinglish.  You can do this through practice and learn from corrections.