Hello! I'm Steven. This is my first essay here.  text, so, [considered rude for being pushy and imperious] Please read it [This is obvious, otherwise how are we going to correct? :) ]and I'll wait for the corrections and I thank you in advance. !

Let me give say something you a little resume about myself me. [It is better to say, "Here's a little bit of myself"] I was born in Salinas, California, USA. My parents (both Mexican) took me to Mexico when I was just a few months of age . and so I couldn't didn't learn English in the USthere. Here in Mexico, I learnted Spanish, (my native language), tongue and  being in the At school I began to learn English in school.  and I began to take took extra classes too lessons with from an old lady that who migrated from USA to Mexico (Jalisco, Mexico's "Tequila's State"), . She is a very intelligent woman but when she returned to USA to visit her relatives, I had to look for any other another teacher. so that's how I found a teacher one from Peking.  Yes, from , China! yah! A young woman that lady who used to teach Chinese, French and English. She was so is very cool and I learnted a lot with much from her. Some months after later, she left the city Jalisco [The way you wrote is ambiguous and confusing.  It can mean that she moved from Peking.  This makes no sense until much later.] to move to the capitol/Mexico City/, and I have to go back to returned with my first teacher, [ the old woman that whom I had mentioned earlier/previously have told you.] [This last phrase can be omitted since we know from the context because you only mentioned two other persons.]