tolong koreksi

Jangan menimbun sampah! atau jangan menumpuk sampah! Sampahnya jangan digunung.

Tolong tuliskan barang-barang yang diperlukan Tolong tuliskan barang-barang yang diperlu.

Gunakan penyedot debu untuk mengelap. Pakai mesin sapu (vacumm cleaner) kemudian mengelap.

(I actually don't understand what you mean. Does this sentences is actually you want someone to use vacum cleaner for sweaping? The correction that I made is the one for warning someone to use vacuum cleaner in order to sweap)

merawat bayi. take care of baby -> memomong bayi? merawat bayi?

Jangan menggunakan garam terlalu banyak. Garam jangan dipakai banyak.

Notes:

- If you want to use "Jangan" to make command sentence, it should be place in the beginning of the sentece and after you make it complete don't forget to put the (!) mark.

- menggunakan and memakai have the same meaning, but "guna" ( the invinitive verb for menggunakan) has different meaning with "pakai" (the invinitive verb for memakai)

- vacuum cleaner is translated by "penyedot debu"

tolong koreksi

Sampahnya jangan digunung sampai menggunung (too much so that it looks like a mountain)

Tolong tuliskan barang-barang yang diperlukan.

Pakai mesin sapu penyedot debu (vacumm cleaner) kemudian mengelap.

take care of baby -> memomong bayi? merawat bayi?

Garam jangan dipakai banyak. Jangan memakai garam terlalu banyak

Sampahnya jangan ditumpuk!

Tolong tuliskan barang-barang yang diperlukan!

Pakai penyedot debu, kemudian mengelap.

merawat bayi.

Jangan pakai garam terlalu banyak!