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A bad experience.
Yesterday I(The way this is written it sounds like you were stolen yourself) my phone was stolen, which was a really bad experience. because, My phone was stolen while I was cycling from my English class to mi my job. and before that, I had just downloaded a song in to my mobile and I don't had didn't have my headphones so I took held the mobile and I took very closer to mi my ear for to listen to the song. And after that Two persons people, (The plural of person is usually people. Persons IS technically a word, but it is usually only used in extremely formal speech, or legal speech) a woman, and a man in on a bike, they followed me across two streets and then, when we were totally alone in the street, they came closer to me and they stolen stole my phone from me, right in the middle of the street. really bad experience. I had that phone almost 2 years and it was still in good state condition. Inside of On it I had my photos, my numbers, my social networks, mi my email and Whatsapps, and it was all still this Open. I hope that the police someday find this these persons people, or at least my mobile. it This was my first experience with that this kind of people. In my country we say call them "Amigos de lo ajeno". Thank you.
A bad experience.
Yesterday I had a really bad experience. I was cycling from my English class to my job, and before that, I downloaded a song on my mobile and I didn't have my headphones so I took my mobile and held it very close to my ear to listen to the song. And after that, two people a woman and a man on a bike followed me across two streets and when we were totally alone on the street, they came closer to me and they robbed (or mugged) me in the middle of the street. It was a really bad experience. I had that phone almost 2 years and in good condition. Inside of it I had my photos, my numbers, my social networks, my emails and Whatsapps all (this was open?). I hope that the police someday find these people or my mobile, it was my first experience with these kinds of people, in my country we call them "Amigos de lo ajeno". Thank you.
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