I passed the insure exam
Yesterday,I passed the insure exam.I am very happy,Because I will make more money and learn more than right now. I have two double jobs~Both of them are seller~I must be work hard .Learn more and meet more friends .I like my jobs.Thanks for my friends and myself ,Because ,They help and tell me many things .
Any I still work hard by myself
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I Passed the insure Insurance Exam
Yesterday, I passed the insure insurance (保險?) exam. I am very happy because I will be make making more money and learn learning more than I am right now. I have two double jobs~Both of them are seller sales~ I must be continue to work hard, learn more and meet more friends. I like my jobs. Thanks for I would like to thank my friends and myself because they have help helped me and tell toldme many things .
Any I will still continue to work hard by myself!
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任思歐 had done an excellent correction, so I am skipping this one. The only thing I would change is "Both are IN sales"
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