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What Kind of Life Do You Want to Get?
I thought about what kind of life do i want to get these days.The answer is I want to be the kind of person i want to be and live for myself, for my dream ,for the people I love.
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Hi,
The writing is really good. Some comments I would make are:
The verb 'think' can be divided into 2 meanings 'reflect in your mind ' or 'have' an opinion. The second one is hardly ever used in a continuous tense (eg. you don't say I'm thinking you are right). But the first meaning is used in continuousd to show that it can be along process. In your text I think it would be a appropraite so you can say 'I was thinking about'.
Although 'what do I want from life' is question you are reporting it so it waould be usual to give it an affirmative structure.
I was thinking about what kind of life I want to get.
'For my dream' is fine. However normally in English we talk about 'dreams' in plural when refering to your plans for life. If you use the singular it would emphasize that you have one very clear goal which is more important than the others.
What I like best about the writing is that you use well complicated sentence structures without errors.
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