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My sister's wedding
My older sister just got married this Spring. She and her husband picked three wedding styles of their wedding (too many!). Two of them are were Japanese traditional wedding, and another is and the third was a common white wedding dress style.
The In the first one style, is that a the bride wears a white wedding overgarment called a shiromuku. We had the ceremony at the a very famous temple for which it is very difficult to get a reservation could rarely succeed in making a reservation. They The bride and groom looked so happy and I was happy too.
Their wedding ceremony and party were wonderful!! The pictures of them putting in the photo albums make me smile every time I open it.
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My Sister's Wedding
My older sister just got married this spring. She and her husband picked three wedding styles of their wedding (too many in my opinion!). Two of them are Japanese traditional wedding, styles and another the other is a common western stylewhite wedding dress style.
They chose/opted for the first one in which is that a the bride wears a white wedding overgarment outer garment called the shiromuku. We had the ceremony at the a very famous temple which successful reservations are rare could rarely succeed in making a reservation. [This sentence is awkward but I am trying to use the same sentence structure. It would be better to say, "Getting reservations are hard to come by"] They looked so happy and so was I was happy too.
Their wedding ceremony and the after party were wonderful!! The pictures of them putting in photo albums make me smile every time I open it Each time I look at their wedding pictures, a smile simply lit up on my face.
My sister's wedding
My older sister just got married this Spring. She and her husband picked three styles of their wedding (too many!). Two of them are Japanese traditional wedding, and another is a common white wedding dress style.
The first one is that a bride wears white wedding over garment called shiromuku. We had the ceremony at the very famous temple which could rarely succeed in making a reservation. They looked so happy and I was happy too.
Their wedding ceremony and party were wonderful!! Their pictures of them putting in photo albums make me smile every time I open it.
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