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Cheat in How to trick my family into going to the shopping center
Today,on in the afternoon I went shopping with my family. We do not go frequently frecuently because they didn't do not like it shopping. We went to a shopping center and we bought two tennis racquets. there were a lot of people because the stores had sales. We were looking shopping about two hours and later we took a had coffee.The They like sports like very much at them so, the next time I hope to cheat trick them, I will say to them that we will go to the sports shop,so I will be able looking for to look at beautiful things in the shopping center.
Cheat in the shopping center
Today,on the afternoon I went shopping with my family, it wasn´t frecuently because they didn´t like it. We went a shopping center and we bought two tennis, there were a lot of people because the stores had sales. We were looking about two hours and later we took a coffee.The sport like very much at them so, the next time I hope to cheat them, I will say them that we will go to the sport shop,so I will be able looking for beautiful things in the shopping center.
The shopping center
Today, in the afternoon, I went shopping with my family. We don't go frequently because they don't like it. We went to a shopping center and bought two tennis racquets. There were a lot of people because the stores had sales. We shopped for about two hours, and then we had coffee. They like sports a lot, so next time I hope to trick them by saying that we will go to the sports store, so I can look for beautiful things in the shopping center.
Well done! Your grammar and vocab are confusing, but I can still understand completely what you are trying to convey. Keep up the good work, and don't stop practicing!
Cheat in the shopping center
Today,on the afternoon I went shopping with my family, it wasn´t frecuently because they didn´t like it.
This afternoon I went shopping together with my family, which we don't do often because they don't like shopping.
We went to a shopping center and we bought two tennis (racquets) , there were a lot of people because -the stores had sales.
We wandered around/ looked around for two hours and later we had coffee.
The sport like very much at them so, the next time I hope to cheat them, I will say them that we will go to the sport shop,so I will be able looking for beautiful things in the shopping center.
(I don't understand the last sentence so I'm guessing.)
They like sports very much, next time I'm going to lie to them about going to a sport shop just so that I can look for beautiful things in the shopping center.
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