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Sunburn Last week a ex-coworker called me to tell me some good news and also to ask about how things were going. And talking about heat, fire and so on, she mentioned a well-known place in the village's mountain. I was surprised to hear she had never been there. As a result I took advantage of the situation and suggested going on Sunday. Suddenly, on both sides of the phone there was a kind of excitement suppressed. In fact, I was dying to go hiking. It was long time since the last time I did and really missed it. Although summer is the worst period to do an excursion I couldn't let the opportunity got away. At 7 a.m. we started walking and the first steps were bearable. While we were walking we talked about past and current events. But we need more than three hours to get the summit. Luckily, there was some shadow from a big bush and we sat down to have breakfast. A slightly breeze was blowing and we were over the moon seeing an amazing views. In a full sun we went down and the descent took us at around two hours and a half. Despite the fact that i put a sun protection before leaving home it wasn't enough. I should have taken the bottle of sun protection and even have dressed more covered as I am many freckles in my skin and the sun may cause some damage. At night I couldn't sleep well as a result of getting a sunburn. In the middle of the night I had to go out of the bed to moisturize my skin trying to relieve a little the discomfort. Monday morning I got up tired and also had to have more coffe than usual. The following days the things were getting better and better. Eventually, I do not regret it.

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Sunburn

Last week an ex-coworker called me to tell me some good news and also to ask about how things were going. And While talking about heat, fire and so on, she mentioned a well-known place in on the village's mountain. I was surprised to hear she had never been there. As a result I took advantage of the situation and suggested going on Sunday. Suddenly, on both sides of the phone there was a kind of excitement suppressed suppresed excitement. In fact, I was dying to go hiking. It was had been a long time since the last time I hiked and I did and really did missed it.

Although summer is the worst period time/season to do an excursion I couldn't let miss the opportunity to get away. At 7 a.m. we started walking and the first steps were bearable. While we were walking we talked about past and current events. But we need It was going to take more than three hours to get the summit.

Luckily, there was some shadow from a big bush and we sat down to have breakfast. A slightly light breeze was blowing and we were over the moon seeing an looking at the amazing views.

In a full sun we went down and the descent took us at around two hours and a half. Under a full sun, the descent took around two and a half hours. Despite the fact that i put a sun protection before leaving home it The sunblock/sunscreen that I put on before I left home wasn't enough. I should have taken the bottle of sun protection brought the bottle (of sunblock/sunscreen) with me.

and even have dressed more covered as I am many freckles in my skin and the sun may cause some damage. I have many freckles on my skin so to avoid damage, I should have worn clothes that covered my skin.


At night I couldn't sleep well as a result of getting a sunburn. In the middle of the night I had to go get out of the bed to moisturize my skin, trying to relieve a little some of the discomfort.

Monday morning I got woke up tired, and also had to have more coffe than usual. In the following days, the things were getting better and better. Eventually In the end, I do not regret it.

 

Great job! Overall, your story was very clear and also interesting to read. When you say "sun protection" readers will know what you mean, but people typically call it sunblock or sunscreen - in the US at least. 

-Emrys

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Sunburn

Last week an ex-coworker called me to tell me some good news and also to ask about how things were going. And tTalking about heat, fire and so on, she mentioned a well-known place in on the village's mountain of our village. I was surprised to hear she had never been there. As a result Thus, I took advantage of the situation and suggested going on Sunday. Suddenly, on both sides of the phone there was a kind of suppressed excitement suppressed. In fact, I was dying to go hiking. It was long time since the last time I did went hiking and I really missed it.

Although summer is the worst period to do for an excursion I couldn't let the opportunity got get away. At 7 a.m. we started walking and the first steps were bearable. While we were walking we talked about past and current events. But we need there were still more than three hours to get to the summit.

Luckily, there was some shadow shade from a big bush and we sat down to have breakfast. A slightly breeze was blowing and we were over the moon seeing an amazing views.

In a full sun we went down and the descent took us at around two hours and a half hours. Despite the fact that i I put a on sun protection screen before leaving home, it wasn't enough. I should have taken the bottle of sun protection screen with me and even have dressed more covered up more as I am have many freckles in my skin and the sun may cause some damage.

At night I couldn't sleep well as a result of getting a sunburn sunburnt. In the middle of the night I had to go out of the bed to moisturize my skin trying in an attempt to relieve a little the discomfort.

Monday morning I got up was so tired and also I had to have more coffe coffee than usual. Over the following next few days the things were getting became better and better. Eventually At the end of the day, I do not regret it.

 

I thought I ought to return the favour :) Well done!

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