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Today
I'm sure that it's a long time since I went out (I have a long time not go the street).
Actually,I am not a "home girl", it's (I) just that I don't know many people in my home town (hometown). My cousin came today and (,) she took me out for a drive, which made me really happy. (to the street.And to go for a drive,It's really happy).We bought things (And buy someting) in the supermarket and ate (.And we ate) a barbecue, and drank smoothies together. But I didn't eat much (wasn't eat many) ,just a little, because I am trying to lose weight (.Because in the losing weigh time). But, today, I'm happy. Mum (Mom) said,I hadn't looked at my (haven't look) books (,) and told me get up early (earlly) tomorrow morning. However, I didn't (I don't) want to ,so I studied this (in the) evening instead.
I'd be very thankful if somebody could (I'm very thanks somebody can) correct my composition.Thanks!
Today
I'm sure that I have a long time not go the street. Actually,I am not a "home girl",I just don't know many people in my hometown. My cousin came today,she took me to the street.And to go for a drive,It's really happy.And buy someting in the supermarket.And we ate barbecue, and smoothies.But I wasn't eat many ,just a little.Because in the losing weigh time.But today I'm happy.Mom said,I haven't look books,told me get up earlly tomorrow morning. I don't want to ,so I studied in the evening. I'm very thanks somebody can correct my composition.Thanks!
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