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Diary Recently the weather is not good. it's rain for a while and then sun shines for a while. 最近天气不怎么好, 一会下雨,一会儿出太阳. Luckly, it was not rain when i off work. The groud was dry. I did not do extra work this night. 好在下班的时候, 没有下雨,地面是干的. 今天晚上我不用加班. it's maybe a happy thing to people that often work overtime. I'm not happy. After I get off work 也许对那些经常加班的来说这是一件开心的事. 但是我却不开心. 下班后 I don't know what should i do. it's boring. I have no friend in there. 我不知道去做什么. 很无聊. 我在这里什么朋友. It's the season of rich in longan now, I went to market and bought some longan. 现在是龙眼盛产的季节, 我到市场买了一些. Today the price is more cheap than yesterday. The price is 4.5 yuan per 500 grams. 今天价格比昨天便宜,4.5一斤. Perhaps after a few days the price will more cheap. I like longan, it's sweet, 也许过几天会更便宜. 我喜欢吃龙眼,它很甜. but i dare not eat too much. if you eat too much, you will diarrhea. 但是我不敢多吃. 如果吃多了会腹泻. I came back my dormitory, then i eating longans while watching moive to learn english. 我回到宿舍, 一边吃龙眼一边看电影学英语. Recent two months, I still recit vocabulary and short passage, but it's no effect. 最近两个月,我一直在没单词和短文, 但是没什么效果 My listening,oral and writing are still very weak. Maybe I'm not hard work enough. 我的听力,口语和写作一直很差. 也许我还不够努力 From today on, I decide to write a diary in English every day. 从今天起,我决定每天写一篇英文日记.

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hey i guess that you like poems or Diaries that great i hope we can talk soon to exchange our experiences
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我发现原来我们中国人长得和其他地区的人不一样,你能介绍几个学英语的电影吗?我也在学英语,起码我句子和单词都没一个是依靠谷歌出来的...
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Diary

 

Recently the weather is not great good. One moment it's raining for a while and then sun shines for a while next, the sun is shining.
最近天气不怎么好, 一会下雨,一会儿出太阳.

Luckily, it was not raining when I got off work. The ground was dry. I did not do extra work this night Tonight I won't have to work extra.
好在下班的时候, 没有下雨,地面是干的. 今天晚上我不用加班.

it's maybe a happy thing to people that often work overtime. I'm not happy. After I get off work
也许对那些经常加班的来说这是一件开心的事. 但是我却不开心.

Perhaps for others, having to work overtime is a happy thing.  However, I am not.


I don't know what should i do. it's boring. I have no friend in there.
下班后 我不知道去做什么. 很无聊. 我在这里什么朋友.
After work I don't know what to do.  Very boring.  I don't have any friend here.

It's the season of rich in longan now, I went to market and bought some longan.
现在是龙眼盛产的季节, 我到市场买了一些.
Now, it is the season for longans.  I went to the maket to get some.


Today the price is more cheap than yesterday. The price is 4.5 yuan per 500 grams.
今天价格比昨天便宜,4.5一斤.
It is cheaper today than yesterday, four and a half Yuan for a pound.
Perhaps after a few days the price will more cheap. I like longan, it's sweet,
也许过几天会更便宜. 我喜欢吃龙眼,它很甜.
Perhaps even cheaper later.  I love them; very sweet.
but i dare not eat too much. if you eat too much, you will diarrhea.
但是我不敢多吃. 如果吃多了会腹泻.
However, I dare not eat too many as I may have the runs.

I came back my dormitory, then i eating longans while watching moive to learn english.
我回到宿舍, 一边吃龙眼一边看电影学英语.

Upon returning to the dormitory, I ate while watching a movie to learn English.

Recent two months, I still recit vocabulary and short passage, but it's no effect.
最近两个月,我一直在没单词和短文, 但是没什么效果
These recent two months, I have been learning vocabulary and writing short essays but not much improvement.


My listening,_oral and writing skills are still very poor weak. Maybe I'm not hard working enough.
我的听力,口语和写作一直很差. 也许我还不够努力



From today onwards, I decided to write one page in my a diary in English every day.
从今天起,我决定每天写一篇英文日记.

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Diary

Recently, the weather has not been (is not) good. It rains (it's rain) for a while and then the sun comes out (shines for a while).
Luckily (Luckly), it was not raining (rain) when I left (i off) work. The ground was dry. I did not do extra work this night.
People may be happy to work overtime (it's maybe a happy thing to people that often work overtime.) but I'm not (happy). After I leave (get off) work
I don't know what to (should i) do. It's boring. I have no friends here (in there).
Now is (It's) the season when the longan is plentiful (of rich in longan now,) so I went to the market and bought some (longan).
Today the price was cheaper (is more cheap) than yesterday at (The price is) 4.5 yuan per 500 grams.
Perhaps, after a few days, the price will get cheaper (more cheap). I like longan, it's sweet, but I (i) dare not eat too much. If you eat too much, you may suffer from/contract (will) diarrhoea (diarrhea) .
I returned to (came back) my dormitory and then (then i eating) ate longans while watching a movie to learn English..
In the last (Recent) two months, I have been reciting (still recit) my vocabulary and short passages, but it hasn’t helped (it's no effect).
My listening, oral and writing skills are still very weak. Maybe I'm not working hard (hard work) enough.
From today on, I have decided (decide) to write a diary in English every day..

 

 

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