I want to recommend a Chinese movie

I want to recommend a Chinese movie: 'The Equation of Love & Death '.The film's heroine is Zhou Xun. Maybe the young Chinese girls will is not like the this movies. I am young, but I love the movie.This movie does not have is not beautiful clothes and beautiful houses, but this movie is very touching. A girl waits for her lover, she is waiting waits for four years. She did not know, he has been at her side all the time. Zhou Xun's acting is superb. Maybe she can not compare to with the beauty of Fan Bingbing，but I love her. She is a simple and sweet girl. The beginning of the film may not appeal to you, Calm down and but have patience to and watch. You will love it. My English is not good，and thank you for reading my article.

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Perhaps I will go and find this film if I'm bored :) 

I want to recommend a Chinese movie

I want to recommend a Chinese movie, 'The Equation of Love & Death '. The film's heroine is Zhou Xun. Maybe the young Chinese girls is are not like in the movies [I didn't get it; the girls in real life are different from those in the movies, or they will not like this movie?]. I am young, but I love this movie. It is not about beautiful clothes or beautiful houses. But this movie is very touching [I don't understand why you wrote a 'but', I guess the idea is more like 'in addition']. A girl has been waiting for her lover for four years, and she did not know he had been atby her side all along. Zhou Xun's acting is superb. Maybe she can not compare with the beauty of Fan Bingbing, but I love her. She is a simple and sweet girl. The beginning of the film may not appeal to you, but calm down and have patience to watch it further. You will love it. My English is not good, but thank you for reading my article.

Your English is good, and you did a great job telling what you wanted to. I recommend you pay attention to spaces after commas and periods, and study a little bit of connectors so you can write longer, more complex sentences (many of the corrections I did were regarding this point, so that the overall sentence would look more natural).