Exercise: Letter to My College Cafeteria

TASK DESCRIPTION:

You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements.

Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria, say what is wrong with it and suggest how it could be improved

MY LETTER:

Dear mManager,

I am a student of Shanghai University, who loves your cafeteria and eats there every lunchtime. I am writing to present you with some of the cafeteria's weaknesses and suggest some measures to tackle them.

First of all, I really appreciate your restaurants for its reasonable prices and delicious and nutritious food. That is why I always eat there for lunch though there are a handful of other restaurants on campus.

However, I think you need to consider some of the weaknesses seriously and take real measures to handle them to make it more popular. First, the dining tables and chairs do not match in height. You should replace the tables or chairs. Worse still, sometimes the floor is wet and slippery, which results in a considerable number of accidents. A friend of mine slipped and fell last Friday, and struggled to get up with my help. You should always keep the floor dry. If your employees overwork and do not have time to make sure this it is possible, you should hire more people. If this still is not possible, put on out a sign to warn your guests of it.

Anyway, I love your restaurant and trust you are willing to improve your restaurant it. Please seriously consider my concerns and suggestions seriously. Thank you.

Yours sincerely,
Melaminefree Wang

** Great job! All of the suggested changes are fairly minor.  The last suggested change I highlighted in blue to indicate that it was a change of preference rather than of necessity. You write well, but there's always room to improve. Keep working hard!

Exercise: Letter to My College Cafeteria

TASK DESCRIPTION:

You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements.

Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria, say what is wrong with it and suggest how it could be improved.

MY LETTER:

Dear manager,

I am a student of Shanghai University who loves your cafeteria and eats here every lunchtime. I am writing to present you with some of the weaknesses and some suggestions to tackle them.

First of all, I really appreciate your restaurant for its reasonable price and delicious and nutritious food. That is why I always eat here for lunch though there are a handful of other restaurants on campus.

However, I think you need to consider some of the weaknesses seriously and take real measures to handle them to make it more popular. First, the dining tables and chairs do not match in height. You should replace the tables or chairs. Worse still, sometimes the floor is wet and slippery, which results in a considerable number of accidents. A friend of mine slipped and fell last Friday, and struggled to get up with my help. You should always keep the floor dry. If your employees overwork and do not have time to make sure it is possible, you should hire more people. If this still is not possible, put on a sign to warn your guests of it.

Anyway, I love your restaurant and trust you are willing to improve your restaurant. Please consider my concerns and suggestions seriously. Thank you.

Yours sincerely,
Melaminefree Wang