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I have to writing write a formal e email. Please helpıng to me. Thanks. for thıs

Dear Sir or Madam, [It would be better if you have the name of the person]

I'm am writing a thesis about on concrete. [Better still, "Currently my thesis is on concrete."] I'm am [When writing in such a formal situation, no abbreviations is allowed!] goıng attending the Istanbul Technıcal Unıversıty ın Turkey. I request can you participate of your project;This can be considered rude.  You don't request.  You are not from a position of superiority. You must show humility and sincerity.  Your project,  (Callado Villalba and Molino de la Hoz) have greatly /intrigued my interest/inspired me/.   technical detail. I would be most grateful if you could attend do this matter as soon as possible. if I am allowed to be part of your/the technical team.

I humbly await for your most august reply.

Regards.Most sincerely,

Please help

I have write a formal e mail. Please help me with this. 

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a student at Istanbul Technıcal Unıversity in Turkey. My thesis is about concrete. I would like to request your participation, I hope you could send me the technical details of your projects Callado Villalba and Molino de la Hoz.

I would be grateful if you could attend do this matter as soon as possible.

Best Regards,

Please help:

I have to write a formal e mail. I would appreciate your help with thıs.

Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing a thesis about concrete. I'm a student at Istanbul Technıcal Unıversıty ın Turkey. I'm writing to request your participation; I'm interested in the technical details of your projects (Callado Villalba and Molino de la Hoz). I would be grateful if you could attend to this matter as soon as possible.

Regards.