A little of me
Hello, my name is Rocío, I live in Málaga (Spain). I am 20 years old and I study Criminology in University. I need learn English because I want to go at other countries to work and study. My hobbies are reading and sport, I love taking my bike and drive along the coast. Besides to study I work as waitress for I can pay my studies, I like have my busy time with work and study because I am an active girl.
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Si me encanta leer, suelo leer libros de policías y crímines. Pero también me gustan los libros de fantasía y aventuras. ¿ A ti te gusta leer?.
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Don't worry Matt, I want to learn writing english so I appreciate your corrections.
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Sorry about all of the corrections. Italki didn't load properly for me.
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Qué te gusta leer?
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A little of (bit) about me
Hello. My name is Rocío. I live in Málaga (Spain). I am 20 years old and I study Criminology in University I will say "at university" because I think "in University" is OK in some places. Also, I think it should be "university" with a small U because it's not the name of the university. I need to learn English because I want to go at to other countries to work and study. My hobbies are reading and sport. I love taking my bike and [to drive "driving" is better] along the coast. Besides to studying, I work as a waitress for so (that) I can pay for my studies. I like to [have my busy time you can say "stay busy", "keep busy", etc.] with work and study because I am an active girl.
[Try to avoid starting all your sentences with "I..." or "My..." if possible.]
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