Corrections · 9
非常难的问题
我是谁?
为什么我在这里? 我是为了什么出生了的?
啊啊,神,请告诉我。
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这是有的一部分的报道,这是报道中的一部分。写这个报道的人是白血病患者,还十三岁了 才十三岁(“才”表示可惜~~~)
当然已经死了
昨天我在伦理的授课上看到了这个报道 (在......上......固定句式搭配)
并且教师说「这个是作业,你们到下星期请写怎么想的」
现在我在烦恼,
因为没有遇见过这样的状况而且我是完全的健康者.
要是你们看了这个报道,是不是考虑怎么样的事? 是不是会考虑些什么事情?
私の考え:活着就是在寻找这些问题的答案吧。
非常难的问题
我是谁?
为什么我在这里? 我是为了什么出生了的?
啊啊,神,请告诉我。
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这是有的其中一部分的报道,写这个报道的人是白血病患者,还十三岁了 。
当然现在已经死了
昨天我在伦理的授课看到了这个报道
并且教师说「这个是作业,你们到下星期请写出自己怎么想的」
现在我在烦恼,
因为自己从来没有遇见过这样的状况,而且我是完全的健康者很健康的人.
要是你们看到了这个报道,是不是考虑怎么样的事又会怎样考虑呢?
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Here‘s my answer if this question asked me. Who am I? Why i lived here? What I was born to?
Well, if i am the 13 little boy who got leukemia,i would confused, scared, angried, and despaired. It's truely that everyone have to face the death alone sooner or later, but to me? A 13 years old boy, no, its too early. I still have so many things never seen or touched. I don't wanna die with pain! There r such many people around the world, god why u chose me to suffer this pain? What i did wrong? (confused). I'm 13, I love my parents and friends which love me all the time, however, I'm gona die, that will apart from them and me, I will never see them soon instead of darkness, Mom, help me, I'm so scared!(scared). Doctor, why u can't heal me ? I have already stay at hospital such a long time, and U tell me I'm gonna die now? Unbelievable! Why U do this to me? The medicine didn't work yet? U r lier! Daddy, mom, U told me u love me so much, why U two can't help me to let me living longger? I hate u,everyone is lie to me!(angried). Finally, I'm gona die soon, maybe this is my destiny. Thank u mom and dad, I'm sorry I can't stay with u any more, I'll miss u if I have a choice,i will be ur son again in another life, take care. Death is coming, I'm a brave man, I can handle it, let me go, love u forever. Goodbye .
Hope that can help u~XD
非常难的问题
我是谁?
为什么我在这里? 我是为了什么出生了的?
啊啊,!神,请告诉我。
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这是有的一部分的报道,写这个报道的人是白血病,还十三岁了
当然已经死了 (这是一篇报道的一部分,写这篇报道的人得了白血病,才十三岁)
昨天我在伦理的授课看了这个报道
并且教师说「这个是作业,你们到下星期请写怎么想」(请写出你们是怎么想的 )
现在我在烦恼,
因为没有遇见过这样的状况而且我是完全的健康者.
要是你们看了这个报道,是不是考虑怎么样的事?(是怎样考虑这件事)
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