forget it: a poem
Nothing To Do
Nothing To Do In my Room
After You Left Without Looking Back
Now I'm Still
Now I'm Still holding your hands
Why Can't I Touch Your Heart And Stay Just A Moment
If I Can Forget Your Voice, I Always Listen To Sad Songs And Remember The Movie Scenes I Watched Before
If I Can Forget Your Smile, I Never Be Hurt When I See A Family Laughing On The Beach
If I Forget You If I Forget You Forget You....
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forget it: a poem
Nothing To Do
Nothing To Do In my Room
After You Left Without Looking Back
Now I'm Still
Now I'm Still holding your hands
Why Can't I Touch Your Heart And Stay Just A Moment
If I Can Forget Your Voice, I Always Listen To Sad Songs And Remember The Movie Scenes I Watched Before
If I Can Forget Your Smile, I'd /I'll Never Be Hurt When I See A Family Laughing On The Beach
OR . . . Smile, (I'm not hurt / It doesn't hurt / I don't hurt / I never hurt) When I See . . . <-- These keep it in the same tense as your last line, if that matters.
If I Forget You If I Forget You Forget You....
Good work, sad but beautiful :)
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素晴らしい!
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