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I Am Back and I Am Going to University Hi ,my dear friends ,after one year's study and now two month's vacation ,I am back finally.One month later ,I will go to university ,starting a new life.Nervous and excited ,I am waiting for my university .How have you been ,my friends?Do you still remember me?Oh ,hope you still do remember me .Haha ,last ,have a nice day all.

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I am Back and I am Going to University

 

Hi, my dear friends.  After one year's of study and now two month's vacation, I am finally back.  Next month, I will start university and a new life.  I am waiting for it, nervous and excited.  How have you been, my friends?  Do you still remember me?  Oh, I hope you still do remember me, haha.  Lastly, have a nice day (all)!

 

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Good work!

Make sure you space your words and punctuation properly so it's easier to read.

Otherwise, no glaring problems.

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I Am Back and I Am Going to University

Hi my dear friends , after one year of study and now two months of vacation , I am back finally. In one month's time , I will be going to university and starting a new life. I am nervous and excited for going to university. How have you been my friends?

Do you still remember me?

Oh I hope you still do remember me .Haha.

Lastly ,I hope you all have a nice day.


Well done, what a great piece of writing this is. One thing I would say is be careful with the number of commas you use, other than that a good effort

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@sister ,haha ,thanks ,i really appreciate it
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You took great pics during your trip :)
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@sister ,really ?haha ,good,you can see many pictures,including my friend's

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