我一天的生活七月十七号

昨晚我睡的不好。知道因为是我睡觉以前不吃晚饭所以睡觉的时有饿了（因为我在睡觉以前没吃晚餐，所以睡觉时就饿了）。 我今天上了一堂表演课。 晚上时候就跟一个女孩子我 (have the hots for?) 用电话说话一些。（晚上的时候我跟一个女孩透过电话聊天）I think that she likes me, but I don't know for sure. （我想她喜欢我，但是我不确定）

谢谢你们！

我一天的生活，七月十七号

昨晚我睡的不好，因为我睡觉之前不吃晚饭，所以睡觉的时候有点饿了。I took an acting class today? 也念一个据。 晚上的时候就跟一个女孩子 (have the hots for?) 用电话说了一些话。I think that she likes me, but I don't know for sure.

谢谢你们！

我一天的生化

(生活 is right, means life,生化 means biochemistry. lol)

七月十七号

(right, but maybe if change to 7月17号，seems more Chinese style~)

昨晚我睡的不好。

(well, sorry to hear that, sleeping is important to us...的 should change to 得，usually 的 with n,and 得 with adj)

知道因为是我睡觉以前不吃晚饭所以睡觉的时有饿了。

(Ok, here are many wrong words. Let’s find it out. 知道，who know that? The God? Yes, maybe but I guess U know it more clearly than anyone. hah .so here we should add 我 before the 知道，after 知道 also should take 是 behind ,because we need a word to connect 知道 and 因为. So the right sentence is 我知道是因为我睡觉，here 以前 should change to 之前，because 以前 means long time ago, I think at least not last night,之前 means something before something. After that 不吃 should change to 没吃，because of 不 sounds like u really don’t like dinner, but im sure u not always do that, don’t u? so if use 没，sounds better than 不，unless u do hate dinner….睡觉的时，delete 的 ,add 点 or 点儿 after 有。我知道是因为我睡觉之前没吃晚饭，所以睡觉时有点儿饿了。)

I took an acting class today?

(我今天上了一节表演课。Why use“? ”here，it means u not sure if u had that class? )

也念一个据。

Sorry, dear…I can’t understand the sentence….

晚上时候就跟一个女孩子我 (have the hots for?) 用电话说话一些。

晚上add 的 here，时候，delete 就 add我 before跟，so its change to “晚上的时候我跟一个女孩子”. Have the hots for？whats ur meaning? u want tell us she is hot??haha. 用电话说add 了，put 一些 before 话，we have the new sentence，“晚上的时候我跟一个女孩子用电话说了一些话。”

I think that she likes me, but I don't know for sure.

我想她喜欢我，但是我不能确定。(well..i think that depends who call who first…)

谢谢你们！

U are welcome. Haha. Wish u can understand my English , hahaha. have a nice day~

我一天的生化 生活  七月十七号

昨晚我睡的不好。我知道是因为是我睡觉以之前不没吃晚饭所以睡觉的时有候饿了。I took an acting class today? 我今天上了一节表演课。也念一个据。 晚上的时候我就跟一个女孩子讲电话（在电话里聊天）（It sonds more natural for express such thing) 我 (have the hots for?) 用电话说话一些。I think that she likes me, but I don't know for sure. 我感觉她喜欢我，但是我不确定是不是真的。
谢谢你们！

呵呵，写得很有意思！希望你的直觉是对的！哈哈!

我一天的生活化 七月十七号

      昨晚我睡得的不好。知道因为是我睡觉以前不吃晚饭，所以睡觉的时候有些饿了。I took an acting class today?  我今天上了一节表演课/戏剧课。 也念一个据。 晚上的时候，就我跟一个女孩子我 (have the hots for?) 用电话说了一些话一些。I think that she likes me, but I don't know for sure.  我觉得她喜欢我，但是我不能确定。

谢谢你们！