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INTRODUCE MYSELF HI,my name is Ronny.I'm a chinese boy,I like music and I instruct a band in university.Travel around the world is my dreamboat so that increas the knowledge and see the nice view in different contries.I hope chat with you!

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INTRODUCING MYSELF

Hi, my name is Ronny. I'm a Chinese boy. I like music and I instruct a band in university. Traveling around the world is my dream so I need to increase my knowledge and see the nice views in different contries. I hope to chat with you!

 

[Good start.  A 'dreamboat' is a very good-looking man or woman, so I think you just mean 'dream']

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INTRODUCE MYSELF Introducing Myself

 

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Hi. ,my name is Ronny.I'm a chinese boy, [画蛇添足. 從你英文名當中可知道你是男生.這样寫法是說明讀者是儍瓜. 有些英文名難分男女,那時才可以這样說明] I like music and I instruct a  teach band music in the university.__Travelling around the world is my dream.boat so that To travel is to increase the one's knowledge and see the nice view in beautiful scenery in different countries.__I hope chat with you soon!

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