Foods That Cause Disease

Yesterday I saw a program about the common foods associated with disease, like: diabetes, renal disease, and heart disease. These diseases are caused by poor diet. People consume a lot of oil, sugar, salt, and animal fats, but they don't think that it will be harmful down the road. I believe that people don't want to know the truth. Despite that, we have all heard about a family member or friend with diabetes or heart disease; it is very common. The medicines are very expensive and those diseases are chronic.

Sé que cometí muchos errores, pero está también es una forma de aprender :)

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[Note: Generally, you want to be consistent with your noun forms. If you keep saying "people" do this and "people" do that, it's not good form to switch to "we" do this (generally speaking). If you want to say "we" do this and that, you should do it all the way through. Since you said "people" first, I made them all "people." I hope that helps. :) --Sal ]

Foods that cause disease

Yesterday I saw a program about the common foods associated to disease like: diabetes, renal disease and heart disease. The diseases main effect is feeding bad. People consume a lot of oil, sugar, salt and animal fats; but we never think that it can be prejudicial in many years. I believe that we don't want to know anything about it; however, we become more familiar when friends are diagnosed with diabetes or heart disease.  This happens often because it is very frequently. The medicines are very expensive and those disease are chronic.

Sé que cometí muchos errores, pero está también es una forma de aprender :)

Thanks for checking it!!!!

this is good be careful with run-on sentences and double negatives