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In 1945, He went to Nanjing form Chongqing with full anger and unknown destiny. he thought the war is for peace.but after he met a lot of soldier (communist party)
In 1949, He left Shanghai for get survival with nationalist party and his belief. he believe believed the real peace is will come here.
In 1984, He received letter from his hometown. though his parents died he also has brothers and sisters. in the peaceful world he want to going back hometown but he can't. he is waiting on both sides of the unity.
In 1995,He sat in the plane of the communist party to hometown. between 50 years his face was full of love and hate!
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In 1945, he went to Nanjing form left Chongqing and headed for Nanjing with full of anger and an unknown destiny. He thought that the War is for peace.but after he met a lot of soldier ( and fought with many soldiers from the Communist Party.)
In 1949, he left Shanghai for get survival with the Nationalist Party and his belief. He believe believed that the real peace is will soon come here.
In 1984, he received a letter from his hometown. Though his parents had been gone, died he also has his brothers and sisters are still there. in The peaceful world was at peace and he wanted to going back return to his hometown but he couldn't for he was can't. he is waiting on both sides of the unity for Reunification.
In 1995,_he sat in the plane of the a communist party regime heading back to his hometown. Between 50 A duration of fifty years... his A faceful was full of love and hate!
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