My Best Friend.

Ruoxi Wang is my good friend.  We have been in  class together,  but now we separate, because we graduated.
She is very cute and black. I like her very much. She studies  very well, and we often learn from each other.
We learned together and played together. I miss her very much and I hope we can meet again!

   Hello Chinese Girl. That is a very nicely worded,  concise account of your friendship.

I noticed moreover,  with great  interest, that there was not a single spelling error in your entry.

That made a great impression upon me.    Your communication is very clear. I am confident that you will make great progress in your English skills. 

(What is that red thing on your friend's cheek I wonder?)  --Warm Regards,  Bruce

My Best Friend.

Ruoxi Wang is my good friend, that we have been in a class together, but now we separate, because we graduated.
She is very cute and black (dark?). I like her very much. She studies is very well, we often learn from each other. 
We learned together and played together. I miss her very much, I hope we can meet again!