Describing charts

The first chart shows the trend of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995. As we can see, (need a comma after preposition "as") the trend is firmly increasing during these years. It has one period, between 1991 and 1993 in which the trend fell sligthtly, but rapidly it recovered and reached the same level as 1990. This fall could be produced by the 1991's crisis crisis of 1991.

The second chart shows in a percentage of how many Japanese tourists chose to visit Australia. In this chart, (need a comma after preposition "in") the trend is also clearly increasing since from 1985 to 1995. This trend has two important peaks between these years. The first in 1989 and the second in 1994. After these peaks the percentage fall fell slightly and, but the trend is recovered in a period of one or two years.

Both charts have the same possitive positive trend, which is perfectly explained by Japanese situation situation in Japan. If Japanese tourists increase your number, it is also clear that the percentage of Japanese tourists visiting Australia increases. Although they could choose another country to visit, we can see from the chart that Japanese tourists like Australia more day by day.