我最近的电视节目 - "无花果"4

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（这是）我最近的电视节目，无花果，第4集。我在40分30秒左右出现。我饰演一个喝醉了泡妞，但是被那个女孩的男的朋友骂我的人物。

我觉得这个人物没什么意思的，但是有一点搞笑。（P.S: 另起一行，因为表达的意思有所改变。）
我们拍的时候，有很多人看着我们。还有，那个演“男朋友”的演员叫Pierre Png，他是很友好的，也非常专业的. 

写的不错哦，连贯性再加强一下就更好。

My latest TV appearance, from the series "The Score"/无花果, episode 4. My part is at around 40:15. I play a random drunken guy trying to flirt with a girl and getting blown off by her (boy)friend.

It's a pretty lame role but it's funny to watch me try to act drunk. We had a ton of people watching us from outside the view of the camera a...s we shot this in Clarke Quay at 7pm or so, and Pierre Png was a really polite and professional guy to work with.

我最近出演的电视节目 - "无花果"4

http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMjEzMDg1Njg4.html

我最近出演的电视节目，无花果，第4集。我在40分30左右出现。我演一个喝醉的男人，要泡妞，但是被那个女孩的男的朋友骂我的人物。

我觉得这个人物没有很有多少意思的，但是有一点好笑。我们拍的时候有很多人看着我们。还有那个男的演员叫Pierre Png，是很友好的，也很专业的。（你的中文说得很好！your chinese language is good!）
My latest TV appearance, from the series "The Score"/无花果, episode 4. My part is at around 40:15. I play a random drunken guy trying to flirt with a girl and getting blown off by her (boy)friend.

It's a pretty lame role but it's funny to watch me try to act drunk. We had a ton of people watching us from outside the view of the camera a...s we shot this in Clarke Quay at 7pm or so, and Pierre Png was a really polite and professional guy to work with.

我最近参与了的电视节目 - "无花果"第4级的拍摄，

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我最近参与了的电视节目，无花果，第4集的拍摄。我在40分30左右出场。我饰演的是一个喝醉的想要泡妞，但被那个女孩的男的朋友骂了的男人的角色。

我觉得这个人物没有很有多意思的（改为  没有出彩的或者 改为 不是很有意思），但是有一点好笑。我们拍（摄）的时候有很多人看着我们，（这里你想表达的意思没有完  不需要用句号）还有那个男的演员叫Pierre Png是很友好的，也很专业的.

My latest TV appearance, from the series "The Score"/无花果, episode 4. My part is at around 40:15. I play a random drunken guy trying to flirt with a girl and getting blown off by her (boy)friend.

It's a pretty lame role but it's funny to watch me try to act drunk. We had a ton of people watching us from outside the view of the camera a...s we shot this in Clarke Quay at 7pm or so, and Pierre Png was a really polite and professional guy to work with.

我最近【出演】的电视节目 - "无花果"4

http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMjEzMDg1Njg4.html

我最近【出演】的电视节目，无花果，第4集。我在40分30左右【出现】。我【出演】的是个【喝醉酒要泡(?)妞的男人】，但是那个女孩的男的朋友骂我的人物。

我觉得这个人物没有很有多意思的，但是有一点好笑。我们拍的时候有很多人看着我们。还有那个男的演员叫Pierre Png是很友好的，也很专业的.

My latest TV appearance, from the series "The Score"/无花果, episode 4. My part is at around 40:15. I play a random drunken guy trying to flirt with a girl and getting blown off by her (boy)friend.

It's a pretty lame role but it's funny to watch me try to act drunk. We had a ton of people watching us from outside the view of the camera a...s we shot this in Clarke Quay at 7pm or so, and Pierre Png was a really polite and professional guy to work with.