Please correct my sentenses. Thank you!
My parents are finally got the schedule from a travel agency. And we got shocked because we expected to stay some nights in Geneva but they won’t.
Actually, they will go thru Geneva but take a train going Paris soon. It is really hard to meet you in the station because I remember the station is huge and many platforms are there. They are disappointed to hear that. They are missing you so much !!
We really hope to see you again someday!!!
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Please correct my sentenses. Thank you!
My parents are finally got the schedule (itenerary) from the travel agency. And (don't start a entence with "and") We were shocked because we were expecting to stay some nights in Geneva but they won’t weren't able to arrange for it. Actually, we (because your family are the ones going on the trip) will go through Geneva but take a train going Paris soon. It would be really hard to meet you in the station because I remember the station is huge and has many platforms are there. They (who are "they'? be more specific) are disappointed to hear that. They are missing you so much !!
We really hope to see you again someday!!!
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It should be sentences. Not sentenses.
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Be careful with your pronouns. Always make sure that they are clear to understand. A good 'rule of thumb' is to check that the pronoun points back to the most recently used noun. If you would like, try to write the entry again with names/nouns instead of the pronouns, then I can show you how I would use pronouns in this case :)
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