My Hindi is not good but I wanted to say 'Thank you.'

मेरी हिंदी अच्छी नहीं है पर मैं धन्यवाद कहना चाहती हूँ। (better to say :- पर मैं आप सभी को धन्यवाद कहना चाहती हूँ। )

All of you have been kind to me. I have learned many things from you.

आप सभी का व्यवहार मेरे लिये अच्छा रहा। मुझे आपसे बहुत सी चीज़े सीखने को मिली।

You are my second family. We will meet again soon

आप मेरा दूसरा परिवार हैं। हम जल्द ही फिर से मिलेंगे।

Good Effort :)

Saying 'Thankyou' - Hindi

I am going to be moving away from some close Indian friends I made while volunteering at a local temple. I want to try and thank them in Hindi, if I get the opportunity. But I need help making sure I have this correct. Below is the Hindi, Devanagari and English of what I want to say. Please help me make corrections! I appreciate it!

Meri Hindi achha nahim, lekin mein 'Dhanyavad' bolti chahiye.
Sab aap mujhe dyaloo ke the. Mujhe aap se bahut si chizen sikh thi.
Aap mera dusaraa parivar hain. Hum jaldi phir se milenge.

मेरी हिनदी हिंदी (बहुत) अचछी अच्छी नहीं है, लेकिन मैं 'धन्यवाद' बोलती बोलना चाहिए चाहती हूँ.
 आप सब मुझे दयालू((we dont say dayalu in this sense, reframe the sentence, i am not able to think of a natural sentence equally strong here.) के थे. मुझे आप से बहुत सी चीज़ें सिख थी. सीखने मिलीं.
आप मेरा दूसरा परिवार हैं. हम जलदी जल्दी फ़िर से मिलेंगे.

My Hindi is not good but I wanted to say 'Thank you.'
All of you have been kind to me. I have learned many things from you.
You are my second family. We will meet again soon.

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Once I have it correct, I will record myself speaking it to make sure I am pronouncing things clearly. Thank your help!

ashly i will recommend you plz don"t try to speak sentences ..just focus on core ...core means...starting...well if you follow me..i will help you to tell you what is core words in hindi..and we can chat in hindi and also in english on skype...

Saying 'Thankyou' - Hindi

I am going to be moving away from some close Indian friends I made while volunteering at a local temple. I want to try and thank them in Hindi, if I get the opportunity. But I need help making sure I have this correct. Below is the Hindi, Devanagari and English of what I want to say. Please help me make corrections! I appreciate it!

Meri Hindi achha nahim, lekin mein 'Dhanyavad' bolti chahiye.
Sab aap mujhe dyaloo ke the. Mujhe aap se bahut si chizen sikh thi.
Aap mera dusaraa parivar hain. Hum jaldi phir se milenge.

मेरी हिनदी अचछी नहीं, लेकिन मैं 'धनयावद' बोलती चाहिए.
सब आप मुझे दयालू के थे. मुझे आप से बहुत सी चीज़ें सिख थी.
आप मेरा दूसरा परिवार हैं. हम जलदी फ़िर से मिलेंगे.

My Hindi is not good but I wanted to say 'Thank you.'
All of you have been kind to me. I have learned many things from you.
You are my second family. We will meet again soon.

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Once I have it correct, I will record myself speaking it to make sure I am pronouncing things clearly. Thank your help!yes i can help you with this its realy easy for me to  translate this paragraph...