A diary........
From last Wednesday to next Tuesday, I'm going to take some exams....
it's a midterm examination...we can say '중간고사'...in korean(for others foreigner friends who want to learn korean..)
so... I havnt eaten some food that I want ..because I have to go to the school early...it's very sad story~~~I ate only apples for a long time...at morning, at lunch, at evening..haha...^^
I've felt that I will be the Snow white... ~haha..OMG!! where is my the seven Dwarfs!!! I will disturb their's work !! and order to be tested for some exams in stead of me!!! ^_______________________________^
Would you correct The diary ...if you have time ??~~~
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A diary........
From last Wednesday to next Tuesday, I'm going to take some exams....
it's a midterm examination...we can say '중간고사'...in korean(for others foreigner friends who want to learn korean..)
so... I haven't eaten some food that I wanted to ..because I have to go to the school early in the morning...it's a very sad story~~~I ate only apples for a long time...at morning, at afternoon, and at evening..haha...^^
I've felt that I will be like Snow white... ~haha..OMG!! where are my the seven dwarfs!!! I will disturb their's work !! in order to be tested for some exams in stead of me!!! ^_______________________________^
Would you correct The diary ...if you have the time ??~~~
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ahahahaha
sorry I couldn't give the correction, cause my English is not really good either
But I laugh lodly when I read your diary, that's so funny, hahaha ~~
u said that u will be the Snow White, well I'm ready to be the prince then.. haha (kidding :p)
so, how's ur exam? is it going well..?
btw.. nice to meet u Owen :) guess u are a funny person , that's great :)
have a nice day
Chloe~~
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A diary........
From last Wednesday until next Tuesday, I'm going to take some exams.They are
(for others foreigner friends who want to learn Korean..)
So because of this I haven't been able to eat food I like because I have to go to the school early every day. It's very sad story. I ate only apples for a long time. Apples for breakfast, lunch and dinner.
I've felt that I've become Snow white! Haha.. OMG!! Where are my
If you have time would you please correct my diary.
Yes, I just did! ^^
(빨간색) Red = 대문자로 써주세요. Please use capitals.
(파란색) Blue = 정정 & 철자 Correction and Spelling
(녹색) Green = 더 자연스러운 방법 More natural way
(포라색) Purple = 내 생각에 / 코멘트 / 제안 My comment or suggestion
(밑줄) Underline = 구두점과 띄어쓰기 Punctuation &/or spacing
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