go for a walk It's a sunny day, i went for walk wiht my colleague after supper, there were many people on the street, so we were walk very slow, and spent about twenty minutes to acrossed the street.

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go for a walk It's a sunny day, i went for walk wiht my colleague after supper, there were many people on the street, so we were walk very slow, and spent about twenty minutes to acrossed the street. then we seen a park on left. there were many people were dancing along with the music in the park. i feel that the people very enjoy their dance, suddenly, i want to join into their dance, and enjoy myself.

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Going for a Walk

It's a sunny day. I went for walk wiht with my colleague after supper. There were many people on the street, and so we were walked very slowly. It took us , and spent about twenty minutes to acrossed the street. Then we seen passed a park on our left. There were many people were dancing along with the music in the park. I feel felt that the people very enjoy their dance dancers were enjoying greatly so much so that I suddenly, i want too wanted to join into their dance, and enjoy have a good time myself.

情境非常好, 只是你的英文有限,不能發輝. 無論如何, 英文的我定要大寫.

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