good night.so __

This is my design, do you like?
three thing in life when gone never come back:time opportunity and words. so _

it is better to write: 

there are three things that are gone and they'll never come back such as time,opportunity and words.

good night.so __

This is my design, do you like it?
There are three things in life that when are gone will never come back: time, opportunity and words. so _