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I will never forget the day that I did babysitter babysat for my neighbour's son. His name is Tom and he is twelve years old. It was a Saturday afternoon, and when my neighbour had received a phone work call from his job and he had to head to the office go.

So, I went to their home. his house with Tom, [The way you wrote is confusing.  Was the father and his son NOT at home when he received the call and then asked you for help? If this is the case, you need to elaborate more.  We assumed both the father and son were are home. ]firstly we coocked cooked  Tom and I had fun.  Together we first baked some chocolate biscuits and made two strawberrys milkshakes. Later we went to see a program tv about watched a TV science program., Tom loves science. I think he Tom is a very clever kid, because he is always asking about different issues questions ranging from like the universe, or sometimes about the to nature.

Later, we ordered pizza to for dinner, and we saw watched his fauvorite movie, Toy Story. Finally my neighbour came home and  come back, I went to home back thinking about Tom. I want a son like he How wonderful it is to have a son like him!

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Story 1

I will never forget the day that I did babysat for my neighbour´s son. His name is Tom and he is twelve years old. It was a Saturday afternoon, and my neighbour had a phone call from his workplace and he had to go in.  
So, I went to his house to look after Tom. First we cooked some chocolate biscuits and then made two strawberry milkshakes. Later we watched a  tv program  about science. Tom loves science, I think he is a very clever kid, because he is always asking about different issues like the universe, or sometimes about  nature. Later, we ordered pizza for dinner, and we saw (watched) his favourite movie, Toy Story. Finally my neighbour came back and I went to home thinking about Tom. I want a son like him!